Find out what's actually wrong with your pitch deck.
Discover the hidden flaws in your pitch deck with an expert teardown service. Get a video review and written feedback for just $199, delivered in 48 hours.
Asynchronous delivery. No scheduling. No small talk. Just the truth about your deck.
Proven template garnering more than $250M in Seed -Series A. Coaching notes and AI prompts.
You've built your deck. You have no idea if it works.
Your co-founder says it's great. Your advisor says maybe 'tighten slide 4'.
Your mom says it's wonderful. None of that helps. Mistakes I commonly see:
A professional cold read of your pitch deck.
I've rewritten hundreds of pitch decks including 10+ pitch decks that went on to close their rounds — from pre-seed to Series A, totaling over $250M in funding raised. This is how I can help you:
Video Cold Read (15-20 min)
I open your deck for the first time on camera and react slide by slide. You see exactly what an investor would think.
Written Assessment
Structured document with key findings, what's working, what's not, and exactly where your narrative breaks down.
Prioritized Fix List +
48-Hour Turnaround
The 3-5 changes that will have the biggest impact on your deck. Not 40 nits. Delivered within 2 business days.
Three steps. No friction.
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Upload Your Deck
Pay $199 and upload your pitch deck. Just tell me what types of investors you are pursuing.
Get Your Cold Read
Within 48 hours, you'll receive a video plus written assessment.
Fix What Matters
Use the prioritized fix list to sharpen your deck. Book a 1:1 session if you want hands-on help.
Not another startup bro with a framework.
I'm Meredith Clause, founder of Storycore. I've rewritten pitch decks that went on to raise, over and over. Pre-seed to Series A, across AI, real estate tech, SaaS, healthtech and more. Not because I have a magic template, but because I know how to find the story investors actually need to hear.
That's what happens when you spend your career translating complex strategy into clear narratives for boards, investors, and executive teams. Now I do the same thing for founders — because the storytelling problem is identical: you have 15 minutes to make someone believe.
Dan Q., Pre-Seed Founder
AI Tech Platform
(Actively Raising)
“Fantastic work, Meredith gave super valuable feedback on my pitch deck in a very short amount of time!."
Lavell J.,
Seed-Stage Founder
(Raised $5M)
"I asked Meredith to help me craft a story for my VC pitch and she nailed it! She is unbelievably talented, a master storyteller, and so easy to work with."
Eric R, Seed-Stage Founder, SaaS Tech
(Actively Raising)
“Strategic thinker that quickly understood our business and illustrated how we can better convey our authority through some narrative tweaks.”
Not ready for a teardown? Start with the template.
Frequently Asked Questions
What stage founders is this for?
Pre-seed and seed. If you're preparing for your first real pitch to investors or judges, this is built for you.
Do you invest in the companies you review?
No. This is purely narrative advisory. I have no financial stake in any company I review.
What if my deck is really rough?
Good. Rough decks get the most value from a teardown. The earlier you get honest feedback, the less time you waste polishing the wrong narrative.
Is this just AI feedback with a human face on it?
No. Every teardown is a real cold read recorded on camera. You'll see me open your deck for the first time and react in real time. No AI, no templates, no scripts.
What's the difference between this and the free template?
The template gives you the narrative framework — the structure your deck should follow. The teardown tells you whether you applied it correctly and where your specific deck breaks down.
Can I book a live session instead?
After your teardown, yes. $150/hr for a 1:1 working session where we rebuild your deck together.